Generally, programs don't tell you what to include in your personal statement. Let us give you feedback on how you can edit and polish your personal statement.
The primary aim of the personal letter is to pique the reader's interest and get an interview callback. Unfortunately, IMGs are prone to adding irrelevant content in their personal letters. Put yourself in the shoes of the program director. How would you feel about being made to read unnecessary passages when you have hundreds of personal letters to go through?
It's always a good idea to keep your personal letters short and crisp. We can help you:
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